Another Poem.

Discussion in 'The Lounge' started by janemariesayed, Jul 4, 2017.

  1. janemariesayed

    janemariesayed Junior Member

    Here is another poem from my mystery poet.
    I think we can all identify with this, or understand it. Hope you like it! :happy:

    I looked in the mirror

    And what do I see,

    Not one, but two people

    Looking back at me.

    It can’t be true

    You say it can’t be done

    It can you see

    Cause I’m a broken one.
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  3. Concernedgal

    Concernedgal Well-Known Member

    This poem is a poem that I made up. This poem is an expression to the family of suicide victims.
    There is just nothing that rings so true.
    I leave this part of me to you.
    There's nothing left for me in this world.
    I must leave you.
    Because i'm feel like i'm down in a hole and I fear I will never get out.
    My sadness and pain will not go so I have to go .
    I'm down in a hole.
    Losing my soul.
    I'm down in a hole .
    Losing control.
    I'd like to fly.
    But, my wings will never take flight.
    I'm sorry I have to leave don't be blue.
    Just remember that my life was so cruel.
    I will try not to leave you so brused.
  4. janemariesayed

    janemariesayed Junior Member

    What a beautiful poem, I love it. It is very meaningful and sad.
  5. Concernedgal

    Concernedgal Well-Known Member

    This has been my ready to go suicide letter before. It's so hard to be alive sometines. You know? But, I always find a reason to stay.

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